Thursday


Is there such a thing as a positive rejection?

I haven't submitted much fiction to literary journals. Mainly I've focused on trying to revise the novel. (I don't know if I've mentioned this before, but Nate and another friend are currently reading the first half to give me feedback. Soon I'll be giving them the second half. So far they've given me some really good suggestions.)

A couple of chapters in the novel seem to stand alone pretty well. However, they are chapters, not short stories, so there's a definite sense of ... well, what happens next? Which is naturally answered later in the novel.

This is a challenge when you're submitting to a publication that publishes short stories, which don't necessarily need to be tightly wrapped up at the end, but do, I think, need to have a sense of wholeness or completion in and of themselves.

Knowing this, I've submitted a chapter called "Pecado Mortal" to three publications. "Mortal" can mean mortal as in deadly or mortal as in Catholic and "pecado" is "sin," which is a play on words with what happens in this little old chapter.

I got form rejections from the two bigger pubs I submitted to, and I gave the chapter another look-see during my overall novel revisions. This is the rejection note I got from the third submission (names have been removed because I don't think that's important):

Dear Yvonne (if I may),

Many thanks for sending us “Pecado Mortal.” This is better than 90% of the work we see--clear, strong writing, vivid characters, nice pacing. And plenty of life experience here; you’ve got something to say, which also sets you apart from most. Ultimately, I felt the story just wasn’t strong enough for us (competition is fierce, so please don’t be discouraged), but it seems to me you’re on the right path. Good luck with this story elsewhere, and keep writing.

Best regards,
Editor

So, here's my question. Do you think there's such a thing as a good rejection? Just curious.

2 comments:

Incognato said...

I think that's a "good" rejection. I don't think he/she says that to 90% of his/her submitters.

Katy said...

That's definitely a good rejection. They obviously did take the time to read your submission, and they said something extremely positive to you in the note.

I'm going to bring in my file of rejection letters for you to look at (I keep meaning to bring in all my materials... I think you'd expressed interest in the process I went through). Interestingly enough, only one out of 21 letters actually used the word "reject." Most of them said something to the effect of "Unfortunately, we don't see it as right for us at this time." One said "I don't feel enthusiastic about this project" which made me feel like crap for a few days, but most of the others made it clear that they liked our project, that it was unique and well done, but "not a good fit" or whatever.

We sent out over 70 proposals and only got 21 letters back; more than 50 publishers simply ignored us.

Fun fact: Our publisher initially sent us a rejection letter, which was quickly followed up by a "Oh shit we sent you the wrong letter" letter.

Another fun fact: The mistaken rejection letter from our publisher contained two serious typos.